life is like water well

[phalsteen]

this is my essay .. about life and i will be glad to read your comments and your corrections if i make any mistakes




Life is like water well . we need water and we can't live without it .
Water well is dangerous when we fall down or think to get deep into it .But if we drop down there is always chance to get out and we have to try hard to find the chances !
If you aren't satisfy with our life around the surface of the well ,and you gradually get into the well you will notice that dark is starts spread more and more , in this case you will make sure that danger will surround you and you may have some troubles !
If you want to live in safe you have to sit near to the well ,enjoying by nature !

My point is,, don't stick to life so much and be immersed in it !
Because you mustn’t forget your afterlife ..and don’t allow to the gaudiness of the life to attract you and make you forget all the good things that you left them behind you!

Life is good when we manage and control it by ourselves !

We have to be balanced and live the day as if it is our last day and working 4 tomorrow as if we will live for ever !!

[special girl]

lovely topic
gonna a head
best wishes

[๓αℓάҝ]

Okay I like the idea of your topic

My advice depends on what kind of essay are you trying to write

But generally .. If I were you, I would look at my punctuation

Thank you for your topic

[توحد ارواح]

thanks for your sharing
Best wishes

[الأميرة رودي]

I enjoyed reading the topic
thank you

[محمود الصاروخ]

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